Read the next chapter and loved the confrontation and the way both men reacted to what Dean has done. I am just loving the way you broke down Sammy and why he feels the way he did and does and the reasons for his anger and how he grew out of it. It's that kind of backstory thinking that makes writing so much fun and makes writers really good. Thank you so much for sharing that with me. I assumed you intended to have Dean and Sam end up together even after the spell was broken, makes sense to me within the boundries of the story you're telling. It's true, they wouldn't be able to go back and I think Dean loves Sam enough that it could trip over into this other place considering everything that you have had happen to them and everything that will happen. Sex just creates a different emotion bond and intimacy between people and it can destroy a relationship or make it stronger and in the brothers case that is the only two ways it could go, and we don't want them destroyed. Also. YAY ANGST!!! And YAY Dean powers!!!
I read that you were in the hospital and what for and I wish you well and hope you get back to feeling one hundred percent. I know what it's like to hurt and go through long recovery periods so take your time and get better.
I didn't think you should get rid of your present beta, gosh I' sorry if that sounded like that, I just meant a second set of eyes to pick up on things. If I could make a suggestion. In dialogue, try not to have the characters saying things like : "I am sorry that you feel that way, but I will not give up on Sammy." It would come out like "I'm sorry you feel like that, but i won't give up on Sammy." That's kind of what I was hinting at. We're lazy people and we love to run our words together and the boys on the show do it like crazy, especially when their natural Texan accents start to slip out. Other than that, like I said, it was words here and there. No biggie and not gonna stop me from reading because I'm having way too much fun. Again, feel better, also more please.
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I read that you were in the hospital and what for and I wish you well and hope you get back to feeling one hundred percent. I know what it's like to hurt and go through long recovery periods so take your time and get better.
I didn't think you should get rid of your present beta, gosh I' sorry if that sounded like that, I just meant a second set of eyes to pick up on things. If I could make a suggestion. In dialogue, try not to have the characters saying things like : "I am sorry that you feel that way, but I will not give up on Sammy." It would come out like "I'm sorry you feel like that, but i won't give up on Sammy." That's kind of what I was hinting at. We're lazy people and we love to run our words together and the boys on the show do it like crazy, especially when their natural Texan accents start to slip out. Other than that, like I said, it was words here and there. No biggie and not gonna stop me from reading because I'm having way too much fun. Again, feel better, also more please.