I'm glad you like it. I am trying to show some paralells between what Zack's relationship was with Sephiroth and what Cloud's is/will be. It is canon that Cloud is torn overs Seph, over what he really feels. Well, I decided that Zack was too :)

Huge, huge thanks for the comment. I know it's shallow but it truly makes me feel very good and want to write more :)