Amazing the way you lead the feelings in this fic. Intense, tense and preparing the land for what will come to Cloud. The way you connected Zack and Sephiroth was strong and I could feel why Zack didn't survive: He worshiped the General and it seemed he felt like a possesion to Sephiroth. Now,with the blond spiky was another thing..Cloud defied the man and THE man wanted him, because he needed Cloud to feel.Perhaps I'm mixing the Bleeding Skies Seph/Cloud, but all the fic's series joined perfectly to their story together. Wonderful dear!
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Date: 2009-10-02 02:41 am (UTC)Wonderful dear!
Hugs and kisses and keep going!