chapter finished just...
Dec. 4th, 2006 08:01 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
so. I finished chapter 16 of Weapon of choice. It's (now hold tight) 9 500 long. YAY. Someting to read. And it ends in a cutest scene ever. You know me though. cutest means bloody and disturbing but hey...
the problem is that my beta, got internet service and well, stopped answering my mails :) Even though I send ther the file I have no idea if she got it. Besides my email account went on a warpath for a few days. ( Kayla if you see this please answer!!!!!! I'm worried here. Hugs)
second. i decided that some following chapters will be written form a third persons POV. Sam will go on a warpath and it would be much more scary if I showed him only as others see him then. it would only be one or two chapters (or more, depends) but I think it would add quite a twist to the story.
I will try to push teh story forwards during this december. I need to finihs this damn huge thing because I have SO many different ideas.
possible plot bunnies (feel free to steal)
Are you familiar with the "Heart's Desire" universe? where Sam comes back to teh age of 17/18 but with his memories of the time he lived up untill both he and Dean died? Probably yes. I wand tow rite something like this (alreadya sked if it would be okay) but in my story Sam would be much more bitter. He would live alone untill teh apocalypse the demon caused. John and Dean would die along the way.
backstory:
Dean would be possessed over and over again by the demona and forced to do horrible things. Demon would mark him so that it can come back. Sam would free his brother each time but Dean would finally give up and commit suicide not to be a danger to Sam. Sam would gather recources and hold on untill he found the way the apocalypse could have been stopped. Then his friends, bascally a group of witches and other supernatural and human beings that chose his side, would create a powerful spell. This spell would require four innocent being to sacrifice their life willingly.
Sam will return to the age 14 maybe 15 I haven't decided yet with almost all his memories. At first he won't be sure if it's a halucination, a trap caused by the demon or reality. His brain will rebel against the amount of knowledge he brought with himself and will start forgetting things. Basically Sam will have to find a way to store as much of his knowledge as possible, at teh same time going to school as if nothing happened and trying to decide if Dean and John he sees are the real thing. He has a goal. Some things must be done now, to stop the demon. Harsh things. The concept of the story is that Sam was over forty when the spell was cast. He was bitter and saw a lot of really bad things happen. And now that jaded, bitter and a little scary man is in a body of 15 year old boy. He got used to moving on the edge of the supernatural world, using magic and spells daily.
the problem is that would be another long story, so I have to finish Weapon first. Wow. It's along post. So other bunnies some other times. LOL
the problem is that my beta, got internet service and well, stopped answering my mails :) Even though I send ther the file I have no idea if she got it. Besides my email account went on a warpath for a few days. ( Kayla if you see this please answer!!!!!! I'm worried here. Hugs)
second. i decided that some following chapters will be written form a third persons POV. Sam will go on a warpath and it would be much more scary if I showed him only as others see him then. it would only be one or two chapters (or more, depends) but I think it would add quite a twist to the story.
I will try to push teh story forwards during this december. I need to finihs this damn huge thing because I have SO many different ideas.
possible plot bunnies (feel free to steal)
Are you familiar with the "Heart's Desire" universe? where Sam comes back to teh age of 17/18 but with his memories of the time he lived up untill both he and Dean died? Probably yes. I wand tow rite something like this (alreadya sked if it would be okay) but in my story Sam would be much more bitter. He would live alone untill teh apocalypse the demon caused. John and Dean would die along the way.
backstory:
Dean would be possessed over and over again by the demona and forced to do horrible things. Demon would mark him so that it can come back. Sam would free his brother each time but Dean would finally give up and commit suicide not to be a danger to Sam. Sam would gather recources and hold on untill he found the way the apocalypse could have been stopped. Then his friends, bascally a group of witches and other supernatural and human beings that chose his side, would create a powerful spell. This spell would require four innocent being to sacrifice their life willingly.
Sam will return to the age 14 maybe 15 I haven't decided yet with almost all his memories. At first he won't be sure if it's a halucination, a trap caused by the demon or reality. His brain will rebel against the amount of knowledge he brought with himself and will start forgetting things. Basically Sam will have to find a way to store as much of his knowledge as possible, at teh same time going to school as if nothing happened and trying to decide if Dean and John he sees are the real thing. He has a goal. Some things must be done now, to stop the demon. Harsh things. The concept of the story is that Sam was over forty when the spell was cast. He was bitter and saw a lot of really bad things happen. And now that jaded, bitter and a little scary man is in a body of 15 year old boy. He got used to moving on the edge of the supernatural world, using magic and spells daily.
the problem is that would be another long story, so I have to finish Weapon first. Wow. It's along post. So other bunnies some other times. LOL